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One recurrent problem that we often come across in texts for editing and proofreading is what we call run-on sentences...i.e. sentences that are excessively long.

Original: The scene of the crime and any data connected with the crime are able to supply pointers regarding suspects’ identities, assistance in the assessment of scenarios, help in the planning of avoidance or detention procedures, and to assist in the attainment of an improved comprehension of environmental features that may have a link with the crime.

Edited: The scene of the crime and any data connected with the crime are able to supply pointers regarding suspects’ identities and assist in the assessment of scenarios. Both factors also help in the planning of avoidance or detention procedures, as well as in the attainment of an improved comprehension of environmental features that may have a link with the crime.
Original: The cost of paying councillors is becoming almost prohibitive so at a meeting of the cabinet consideration was given to reducing the number of councillors from 35 to 29 and making changes to the boundaries of the wards to accommodate this in order to avoid applying an unacceptable rise in council tax following the increases already made over the past three years.

Edited: The cost of paying councillors is becoming almost prohibitive. Therefore, a meeting of the cabinet considered reducing the number of councillors from 35 to 29, with corresponding changes to the boundaries of the wards. It is hoped that this will avoid applying an unacceptable rise in council tax, following the increases already made over the past three years.